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- You Can Not See Her Thoughts -

Her beam on the waves in fear And wash the dusk with silver tear And tugged it from her deep emotions What matter to her is their colored motions A broken world`s blood hits the ground Water splash and river dashing down Will peace restored again The truth of life ~ Amen 28.09.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/25/2015 1:49:00 AM

Love this poem so much!!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/25/2015 6:40:00 AM

- Hansteven, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/8/2015 9:47:00 PM

A sad poem my friend. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2015 12:34:00 PM

- Yes- sad Phyllis, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 10/27/2015 11:58:00 AM

well written and expressed Anne. 7 ~love, peace and happiness to you ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, R. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2015 11:58:00 PM

Another short, clever and well-written sentiment. Very Good, Anne Lise ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2015 10:46:00 AM

- CayCay, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neil Kruger

Date: 10/6/2015 12:17:00 PM

Absolutely moving.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2015 12:38:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Neil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/5/2015 9:06:00 AM

It seems that what is happening can affect the way we see the world. It can change so quickly. We all wish for peace and harmony in this life, and may it please be with us. Sometimes, our wishes seem so far away.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/5/2015 11:33:00 AM

- Terrible wars, human beings killed, wounded ..... young children growing up in a living hell .... hard to see the future in peace, Duke - Thank you for your words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/2/2015 4:29:00 PM

Dear Anne Lise What an interesting poem here Anne Lise, Not your usual at all but it is really good, It has an extra layer to it a mystical charm one might say, love the ending it pulls it altogether in the end, enjoyed, and thanks for the review of my creepy little dude, it was alot of fun to write this for my little Benny at work he loved it to the max, cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/3/2015 5:58:00 AM

- Cherl, glad you liked this write :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/2/2015 8:25:00 AM

Such sadness and hope in your poem, Anne Lise. Very emotional and powerful thoughts that invite the reader to think about. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/3/2015 5:54:00 AM

- Sandra, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/1/2015 5:34:00 PM

very beautifully painted visions dear pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/3/2015 5:52:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/30/2015 12:41:00 PM

"A broken world`s blood hits the ground Water splash and river dashing down." Golden poem with some truly awesome lines. You nailed it with this excellent poem my friend. A7..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:39:00 PM

- Glad you liked this write, Robert - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/30/2015 5:03:00 AM

That time will come, dear Anne. It is a promise written. This is tragic in its depth. Unusual lines that struck the chord. 7 and FAV. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 5:07:00 AM

- A great honor and pleasure, thank you my friend Kim - You made my day :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake

Date: 9/30/2015 1:11:00 AM

Truly beautiful peice Anne, You have some really nice lines in this that capture her thoughts!!!! God Bless Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:10:00 AM

- Glad you liked this write, Kevin - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2015 3:15:00 PM

of blood and tears. Deep one here!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:08:00 AM

- Too much blood and tears ... - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/29/2015 2:49:00 PM

Have Faith my friend. He will show us the way.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:06:00 AM

- I think it's up to us humans ...... we were not born with evils - Tim, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2015 1:46:00 PM

Emotionally sad; and it's mostly our fault that it has come to this! But not all is lost...we have faith and hope! ~ Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:04:00 AM

- Yes, people's evils .....but hope and faith is important :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 9/29/2015 1:35:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, I enjoyed your poem this day. God bless

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:02:00 AM

- Njeri, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/29/2015 1:08:00 PM

Silver tear is such a soft substance it always flows from deep emotions when heart is hit. sometimes it's very tough to regain my lovely lovely friend. I think wisdom may be helpful. Beautiful poem my lovely lovely friend of heart felt emotions. 7 is sure. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:01:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 9/29/2015 1:04:00 PM

And so shall it be! Mother Nature cares not for the actions of man, but looks on in sadness at the destruction. You did a wonderful job creating the tone. Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 4:00:00 AM

- Janet, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 9/29/2015 11:30:00 AM

I can feel the sadness and hope in your very beautiful poem my dear fried, Anne. I'm Hugging it and you. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your lovely visit on my poem, wonderful comments and for thinking about my approaching special day. God bless you my loving friend. Wishing you a happy week ahead! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2015 3:59:00 AM

- I'm ready for "that special day" :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, sweet friend Leonora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2015 10:49:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..If for a contest, reads like winning material..I can feel the emotion within the lines and the voice of the writer..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2015 11:10:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/29/2015 8:52:00 AM

Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2015 11:10:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/29/2015 1:38:00 AM

What a brilliant writ here. I love how it was constructed, light and love..........A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2015 4:53:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/29/2015 12:38:00 AM

Nicely written Anne-Lise the ending lifted our spirits. Enjoyed reading.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2015 4:53:00 AM

- Michael, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/28/2015 11:47:00 PM

"And wash the dusk with silver tears"....beautiful write Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2015 4:52:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry Heldman

Date: 9/28/2015 11:22:00 PM

Very nice and inspiring!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2015 4:52:00 AM

- Jerry, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)