---Winter's Wind

winter’s wind lifts flocks of sparrow glass pane broken

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:36:00 PM

good image... hope not much damage...pd

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/26/2011 3:50:00 PM

yes, indeed so agree with comment below! Awesome haiku! Deb, I'm so not knowing if I am coming or going lately. Just a thank you for everything and forgive me for missing anything. You the gal!!! Love & hugs always, me xoxo

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/6/2011 8:13:00 AM

we'll need to fix that pane Debbie. but not the poem, it's brilliant. Harry

Nick Bagnall

Date: 4/6/2011 5:29:00 AM

Unusual point of view.

Rick Parise

Date: 4/5/2011 10:01:00 AM

Talk about a turn of events.......broken wing///SOUPMAIL///

Rick Parise

Date: 4/5/2011 9:59:00 AM

Nice ~ Splat ~ I see the free flight ~ I have one other Haiku for you to look at... It has been entered in the next Soup Contest. it was called a black crow swoops low//Now it is tittled Haiku-

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/4/2011 1:27:00 PM

oh no poor birdie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 12:43:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Debbie. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol

Julie Heckman

Date: 4/4/2011 11:02:00 AM

Ominous! and lovely. Thanks for giving me the heads up on my poem which has now been retitled White Tiger. I'm just not sure if it got into the contest so I'll try again. if you get a bunch of them, just delete all but one,,,OK :-)

James Peranteau

Date: 4/4/2011 10:09:00 AM

The "Birds" ! (((((claps))))) great write Debbie ! Have a great week dear poet....much love, james