---Clouds of Blackflies

clouds of blackflies smear the car's windshield red dawn

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:35:00 PM

deep imagery...pd

James Peranteau

Date: 4/4/2011 10:13:00 AM

I see that you are a traveler dear poet ! ;) great write Debbie... much love, james

James Foulk

Date: 4/3/2011 8:52:00 PM

a very creative Haiku you wrote Debbie, enjoyed it.

Timothy Brumley

Date: 4/3/2011 3:25:00 PM

Don't I know it! I have to wash my car daily because of the gnats and other various bugs that find their last living moment on my windshield. Did you get my e-mail add? I was hoping that you would respond, I would really like to converse with you without the character restrictions of soup mail.

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/3/2011 2:34:00 PM

wow! what a descriptive haiku..this is awesome..the colors painted in my mind as i read are wonderful...superb write!...love maryam