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---A Lonely Tower

a lonely tower on a rocky outcropping gold light pierces fog sailors raise a mug aboard the once doomed ship all mainsails unfurl Contest: In the Light of haiku Poet: D. Guzzi

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Date: 9/10/2011 1:57:00 PM
Very nice Debbie..enjoyed your haiku.Best wishes....
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:56:00 AM
Beautifully penned on the light house,Debbie.Nice picture you have painted.Luv.Fabiyas
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Date: 9/9/2011 11:10:00 PM
awesome, Debs. Closest to real haiku that I have probably seen for this contest.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/10/2011 8:21:00 AM
thanks Andie I try BUt I'm afraid the second one at least has judgement in it...the injection of the poets judgement is not done in haiku

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