(3) Three Tear's of a Lonily Man (Never Stop Believing) Pt.2

As the sweltering heat finally simmer's down to it's most modest degree. I notice some
one resting right beside me, someone who once had a home and family, now we're
both are homeless-both are distraught. Upon the rise of the sun we are off to a jour-
ney-whereas disparity is all around us and it has us caught.  Caught in the Ville, other-
wise Jacksonville, and on this journey, "all of these journey's", the homeless face
that irractical fact, that there is a epidemic that is so real.  Yes, real in the Ville.
Yeah! hard to realized, harder to concieve, drugs and alcohol have laid down be-
side us. Sad, this great nation has made cost to cry & fuss.  Not all have made bad
choice's and many do get up. But the tear's of a lonily man-three tears that fall on the
ground. "Homeless in the Ville", asking for help no-one is around.  Homeliness is every-
where, and please don't dare think you-you and whomever, may never face this mess.
"Three tear's of a lonily Man", may one day finally see success.  Then if ever one get
himself back into the realignment of the grace of God as he is called. These tears,
those fears is replaced by the assurence of the groundwork of endurence!!.  For yes
they feed us, give clothe's too.  Believing thing's do get better, to overcome your de-
mise, those tear's of they that need no longer cry will find shelter before the darkness
kisses the rise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/10/2009 10:06:00 AM
having nothing to having everything - What I mean by everything is that we have each other, all our children back in our lives, our Lord to guide us and we have been very blessed - I loved the message in this poem - god Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/10/2009 9:57:00 AM
Wayne - Several years ago now I was serving my third violation on my second term in Prison and i remember how hopeless I felt even my Parole date meant nothing to me because i knew I would be right back - Then while serving time in the hole I found the Lord and at the age of 41 I wrote my first poem - I paroled from the hole with a box of poems, $200.00 and cloth's on my back - My wife and I turned our lives over to the Lord and let him guide us - under his guidance in 5 years we have gone from
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