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AMERICAN CINQUAIN explained

Posted by Brian Strand on 7/25/2025 3:06:56 AM

AMERICAN CINQUAINS Adelaide's answer to the Japanese haiku Poems in shapely form, displaying syllables or stresses in a versatile refrain.

A.DIDACTIC DISCUSSION

TITLE completely optional

FORMAT

FIRST LETTER OF LlNE CAPITALISED

line syllables/stresses

1. 2 Long days

2. 4 Of August sun

3. 6 Where nature blinks and shrinks

4. 8 The dying grass,yellowed in sleep-

5. 2 Held fast

An EXAMPLE OF MINE -TITLED

EXPLANATION

PASSION

Eyes closed

As lips caressed,

Mouths joined,impassioned

Tongues explore,in our love's embrace,

Time-framed

KEY to this form- note how line 1 & line 5 make a link couplet & secondly

the 'turn' 'surprise' from end of line 4 to 5.


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Comment by Chetta Achara on 7/30/2025 8:31:39 AM

Cinquain is one of my favorite forms. Thank you for noting the line 1/line 5 couplet. LIFE IS SHORT// It's not/ As if you have/ A say in the matter/ But if you leave a poem it's/ Enough


Comment by Brian Strand on 7/28/2025 2:00:41 AM

examples of William Soutar's American cinquains here https://wiliamsoutar.blogspot.com/


Comment by Brian Strand on 7/28/2025 1:12:22 AM

More examples of Adelaides's form can be found here https://americancinquain.blogspot.com/


Comment by Justine Fraser on 7/26/2025 3:23:48 PM

Thanks Brian. Do you know where the"Double Swap" poem comes from by any chance?



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