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The Versatile Vignette Poetry

by Suzette Richards

The term vignette (adapted from a word in Middle French meaning little vine) referred originally to a decorative design, usuallt small, used in books and manuscripts, and having edges shading off into surrounding paper. It is also a photophraph with edges shading off into the background. The term gained its literary sense in the late 19th century.

IN LITERATURE

What sets the vignette apart from other literary genre? In a nutshell:  It differs from flash fiction by dispensing with the introduction and conclusion found in the latter genre. Remember the one rule of the vignette: create an atmosphere, not a story.

A vignette is often considered poetic prose/prose poetry. It is a short and focussed narrative sketch using evocative language to express a certain moment, mood, aspect, setting, character, or object, juxtaposing it in sharp focus against a lost background. It might be factual or fictional in content; a standalone piece, or part of a larger script; it records a character’s immediate experience; it is not genre specific and only uses one POV per sketch. It might be as short as a few sentences, or it may have as many as ±800 words per piece. In certain aspects it might be likened to the couplet to be found in poetry: it packs a powerful punch on its own, or enhances the poem it forms part of, for example, a sonnet. It is usually left untitled.

The vignette is the ideal vehicle to cleanse your palate, so to speak, between bouts of writing poetry, or to overcome the dreaded writer's block.

MY EXAMPLES FOR COMPARISON

Vignette - 45 words

I stood on the platform of my youth. The weeds are growing between the railway sleepers where the tracks have rusted in situ. The trains will never run again.  Over the past thirty years our government had systematically neglected the basic rights of its citizens.

Micro-fiction (a subset of flash fiction) – 100 words

I stared out of the kitchen window and noticed that the daffodil heads hung broken by the unexpected cold snap; the life sap frozen in them.

     I turned back to my daughter where she sat crying at the kitchen table. I had just instructed her in a similar vein as my recently deceased mother had done when my husband’s infidelity had come to my notice. I can’t cry for that woman, my erstwhile confidante. Many years ago, Mum had told me not to bring shame upon this family by divorcing my cheating husband. Eventually, he’d died in another woman’s arms.

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Furthermore, in poetry, the vignette (a micro poem -- not under the poetic options here on Poetry Soup.com) is formatted in open form and left untitled. It can include several short stanzas. For multiple vignettes (on the same theme) each should be labelled by a number or a letter, most commonly by Roman numerals. It does not necessarily employ metre or rhyme. This might well be the answer to those poets who favour writing haiku in rhymes.

MY EXAMPLE

I

a tick-tocking in treble

dauntingly dribbling down

like water washing away wishes

II

methodical metronome of metre

evades my endeavours

silence of the iambs

III

stanzas blatantly ignored

formalistic poetic posits

that bamboozle brainiacs

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Then there is ‘The Vignette’, an invented syllabic verse form introduced by Fozari Rockwood, found in Pathways for the Poet, by Viola Berg, 1977. The Vignette is an untitled, unrhymed, hexastich poem in 6 lines: 2-4-4-6-7-3 syllables per line.

 

MY EXAMPLE 

Steaming

bowl of porridge;

cold cutlery.

A threadbare tablecloth

covering the pockmarked wood.

Impatient.

 

Synonyms for vignette

portrait, depiction, sketch, portrayal, illustration, outline



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