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Woods

We walked through the woods and saw piles
of cut timber waiting in well made bails
the narrow path meant we walked in file
onward down until we came to a stile
which lead us on for another mile
the beauty of the  woods bowel 
was high lighted in many styles
we listened to many bird calls
as we travelled through the dales

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Date: 5/16/2024 2:01:00 PM
Sounds lovely and scenic...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/16/2024 2:18:00 PM
Ty SO appreciate as always your taking the time to read hugs Shadow
Date: 5/15/2024 10:21:00 AM
Lovely poem, with brilliant rhymes. I love the smell of wood. Pity but much needed to be cut.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/15/2024 10:35:00 AM
Ty Buhagiar so do I, they need cutting back so new growth can replace old Hugs Shadow

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