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With You

With you

With you feels like walking on air
It’s that feeling like I could skydive
And who! Else could ever compare
No one makes me feel so alive

With you, is this feeling of elevation
And something I’ve never before felt
And more true, this strong sensation
As I am now left totally blessed out

With you is where I now want to be
And no matter the time or space
If blue I’m filled with total ecstasy
You’re now making my heart race

With you, makes me feel good inside
Happiness has never tasted so sweet
Whenever us two are side by side
I could not feel more so complete







This sum up I think perfectly how you make me feel
Whenever I’m around you, I know this one I gave you before
This version however slightly updated
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Part one of two I hope this speaks volumes
Could I say any more? love always David
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Written by David Scott January (2014)
Dedicated to dawn Elena Louise Osmond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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