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Whimpish: of, relating to, or characteristic of a weak, ineffectual, timid person

Wrong in taking risks, acts too fragile like the fish
Highest level of this strong will ends in a wish
Improper experience, lacking growth, and childish
Mama is always needed for things to flourish
Papa must stay or else progress will diminish
Indented ability will always demolish
Strength so minute, for a weakling to be sluggish
Harboured fears, always making confidence feverish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/18/2018 10:49:00 AM
Sadly, there are too many of these today. You penned the truth.
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