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To Find

the look in her eye drew me in
and the depth of her mind destroyed me
in a most alluring way

heartbeats sparked
and I only had one choice
but to stay

in the heat of the moment
in the glow of the night

she captured something
something simple
I thought I had put away

soothing comfort with her eyes
dazzling senses with her mind

a chapter unwritten
a poetic storybook 
that only she could bring
and only I could find

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Date: 10/8/2022 10:55:00 AM
subtle?
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/15/2022 1:13:00 PM
Apt - https://youtu.be/D8JKXlTY70g
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 7:52:00 PM
this one's good - https://youtu.be/jcjDrE1ye-E
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 2:34:00 PM
Imagination, is a wondrous thing. Of course it can go the other way. Light and Dark.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 2:34:00 PM
Response to TS Poetry's poem, "Read" - https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_dream_of_her_untouched_sea_1246848
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 2:33:00 PM
"Read" by T.S. -https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/read_1246698
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 2:07:00 PM
they should name this cat, "Subtle" watch video link below.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 1:45:00 PM
https://youtu.be/Zao3t0V9Q2g
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 1:29:00 PM
"The Fox Runs" by T.S. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_fox_runs_1200338
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/9/2022 1:20:00 PM
"Suck It" by T.S. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/suck_it_1243633
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/8/2022 6:07:00 PM
Yes, subtle. I've read many of his sensual poems, but I'm sure not as many as you have.

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