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The Wind And The Rain

Powerful forces reign over our world
some forces are evil, but some good
they have a power beyond our lives
if you could strip them bare as nude

Then maybe their power would defuse
but here you have wind and rain
two great forces, when combined so lethal
that they cause trouble to leave a stain

Last evening, lying sleepless until early morn
these two were shouting in full voice
makes one ponder to think so vivid
can cause much damage, like broken joists

In the small hours, listening so clearly
within the whistling wind in tune
joining rain's wetness running down outside
devastation ruling brings so much ruin

These powerful forces are beyond us
reigning outwith our feeble frames
be sure never to forget their venom
catching like wildfire into full flames

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/9/2025 9:02:00 PM
The world is so scary when you really think about all as you wrote about. I can't. Prayer of Serinity. Good poem, but I leave a bit saddened. Maybe I should go to Jan's pages and find a limerick! Enjoyed your writing ... CayCay
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/10/2025 10:55:00 AM
Thanks again CayCay, I hope you're not too sad but enjoyed this just the same, Glad you enjoyed my writings, blessings,Gordon

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