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The Wind And The Rain

Powerful forces reign over our world some forces are evil, but some good they have a power beyond our lives if you could strip them bare as nude Then maybe their power would defuse but here you have wind and rain two great forces, when combined so lethal that they cause trouble to leave a stain Last evening, lying sleepless until early morn these two were shouting in full voice makes one ponder to think so vivid can cause much damage, like broken joists In the small hours, listening so clearly within the whistling wind in tune joining rain's wetness running down outside devastation ruling brings so much ruin These powerful forces are beyond us reigning outwith our feeble frames be sure never to forget their venom catching like wildfire into full flames

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Date: 5/9/2025 9:02:00 PM
The world is so scary when you really think about all as you wrote about. I can't. Prayer of Serinity. Good poem, but I leave a bit saddened. Maybe I should go to Jan's pages and find a limerick! Enjoyed your writing ... CayCay
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/10/2025 10:55:00 AM
Thanks again CayCay, I hope you're not too sad but enjoyed this just the same, Glad you enjoyed my writings, blessings,Gordon

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