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The Whole Universe Itself Is a Big Ocean

the whole universe itself is a biggest ocean
                                unseen non aquatic wisdom's filled in
                                 all we are swimming from self world
                                 with whatever we individually have

                                means are many where ways are so
                                  all do not have the same destiny 
                         condition of life speaks not alike as of creatures
                              but destination is to be happy always

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Date: 6/16/2017 11:30:00 PM
yes, the universe is awesome like your poem :)
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Date: 6/18/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/11/2017 7:28:00 AM
- And then we can ask: ... what's happiness (?) - An interesting and wise poem Bl, great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thanks my lovely dear friend for your comment of appreciation. Loved always, bl

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