Stratosphere

seduction sits in the prepotence
deep blues inviting  
to engulf
in the wading of her fens  
 
without apprehension  
she is slayed  
endorphins exploding in air
fear interrupting of night  
swords driven tight
in the waning and the might
 
my blood is now lain upon your hands  
 
I lick the droplets running down your legs  
consuming of what is and what was life  
contentment fogging up
the vision of an attractive mind
 
~~~~~  
 
 
she has a way of making things better  
even when the devil has stepped  
directly in front of my way

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 3/4/2023 4:30:00 AM

Abother Wow read starting my day, As i’ve lots of experience with real spilling blood lately ( see my…), yourscene of licking blood, pushes this ppoem straight into a deeper dimension in fact devil laden. Supern. Now a follower. Blessings. May the Muse be with you?

Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/4/2023 5:07:00 AM

See my pisn ‘Everyting is gonna be alright.”

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/6/2022 8:57:00 PM

From out of the dark, into the light, this is how, i read this. TS, Harry

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 10/28/2022 12:51:00 PM

sounds a bit messy...but I'm sure she's read up on the perils of internet dating and has her strategies in place. Probably packing one of those neat little SIG P210-5 Waffen Oschatz extendable sports on a concealed thigh strap, or at least a decent hunting knife.