Seven Babies From Heaven

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FIRST BIRTHDAY OF THE MC CAUGHEY SEPTUPLETS

Write Seven Beautiful Lines With A Twist Poetry Contest
Constance La France

With seven new rows added to their garden the grass is greener
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At the hospital the media is following the birth of septuplets
The headliner is a mother, who brought seven JEWELS to life
Six girls and boy join their mother and father couplets
As the husband's SHADOW came to light he hugged his wife
The media's attention opened the GATE to curiosity hounds
Months later the prying knocks on their door shook their strife
The family would MUTTER each knock, wishing to stay in bounds

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/22/2025 2:39:00 PM

I've been staring at the pic for a good minute trying to figure out which one is the boy and what drug I'd have to be on to deal with all those babies, yi!!! Such an original theme and write. I really enjoyed your poem. It occurs to me that via rude media they may receive extra $ they'll surely need. Enjoyed .. CayCay

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/22/2025 2:59:00 PM

Ty. The idea was to match the contest prompt with the number of babies.