Get Your Premium Membership

serpents, scorpions and owls

slithering, creeping, shuttering terror
serpent grovels along the dust of earth
forked tongue hisses, taunting and twisting 
        is there smoke as nostrils flare?
        is he something to beware? 

followed by scorpion, sharp edged  spite
stinger rises, poisonous venom     hot! 
         daring a challenge, zig zag    striking! 
         watch your feet    is this the devil’s plot? 

owl in the sky stretches its wings
caresses air above the cursed ground
screeching, taunting, threatening 
for it wells knows
          one snap of its powerful beak 
          its death gripping talons
          will extinguish 
              both serpent and scorpion 
                      below. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/3/2025 6:18:00 AM
You've highlighted the frightening nature of these wonderful creatures well Laura. Owls especially are fascinating
Login to Reply
Leiser Avatar
Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2025 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Tom! I’m fascinated by all God’s creatures, including these fierce predators.
Date: 4/3/2025 2:35:00 AM
Three deadly animals although I doubt owls can kill humans. I read about snakes that can kill in four minutes. Loved your poem
Login to Reply
Leiser Avatar
Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2025 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by to comment, Victor! I’m glad you enjoyed this one!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things