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Moonshiners Ditty Collaboration

Gonna wake up
At the brink of dawn
Take a shower
Throw my blue jeans on

The little red rooster
Is my alarm
****-a-doodle doodling
On my farm

Gonna water
All of my crops
Especially
My barley and hops

Gonna spread out
All the bales of hay
Where the goats and the horses
And the cattle stay

In the pasture
Down by the creek
Where we went
When we wanted to sneak

A little moonshine
I stole it from my dad
The best damn moonshine
That I ever had

I'm gonna go
And see a little rodeo
Then I'm going dancing
To do the do-si-doe

Then I'll stop by
Over near the school
To jump in the river
In our swimming pool

Gonna get my little lady
A cold bottle of wine
And get myself a bottle
Of my dad's moonshine

We'll be a parkin'
Up at Lover's Lane
Snugglin' and kissin'
And feelin' no pain

August 16, 2018


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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/29/2018 4:14:00 PM Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/30/2018 6:02:00 AM Thank you, Sara.

Eve Roper Date: 8/28/2018 3:07:00 PM Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Susan...Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/30/2018 6:01:00 AM Thanks, Eve. :)

Francesca Pappadogiannis Date: 8/28/2018 1:47:00 PM Brilliant! Loved this Susan. Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/30/2018 6:00:00 AM Thanks.

Joseph May Date: 8/28/2018 8:47:00 AM Congrats on your win Susan Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/30/2018 6:00:00 AM Thank you.

Charles Messina Date: 8/28/2018 7:41:00 AM Susan, are you sure you didn't write my original poem, I absolutely love the stanza you added. I went back and forth between selecting a few poems for 1st and this was one. Finally, I flipped a coin lol Thank you so much for entering my contest and a huge Congratulations on your win! :) Charlie Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/30/2018 5:59:00 AM Oh my. Such a wonderful comment. I am honored to have placed. This was fun and I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sponsoring and for all you do.

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/28/2018 3:42:00 AM Congratulations, Susan on your win. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/30/2018 5:57:00 AM Thanks.

Susan Ashley Date: 8/17/2018 9:56:00 PM What a great ending stanza you've added to Charlie's wonderful poem, Susan. It fits seamlessly both poetically and rhythmically. Love it! Best wishes for a win! ~Sussn Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 8/18/2018 6:54:00 AM Thank you, Susan!