Susan Gentry Poet Rhyme

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(First 9 stanzas by Charles Messina, Sponsor)

Moonshiners Ditty Collaboration

Gonna wake up
At the brink of dawn
Take a shower
Throw my blue jeans on

The little red rooster
Is my alarm
****-a-doodle doodling
On my farm

Gonna water
All of my crops
Especially
My barley and hops

Gonna spread out
All the bales of hay
Where the goats and the horses
And the cattle stay

In the pasture
Down by the creek
Where we went
When we wanted to sneak

A little moonshine
I stole it from my dad
The best damn moonshine
That I ever had

I'm gonna go
And see a little rodeo
Then I'm going dancing
To do the do-si-doe

Then I'll stop by
Over near the school
To jump in the river
In our swimming pool

Gonna get my little lady
A cold bottle of wine
And get myself a bottle
Of my dad's moonshine

We'll be a parkin'
Up at Lover's Lane
Snugglin' and kissin'
And feelin' no pain

August 16, 2018


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Sara Kendrick August 29, 2018 at 4:14 PM Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 6:02 AM Thank you, Sara.

Eve Roper August 28, 2018 at 3:07 PM Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Susan...Congratulations on your win! Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 6:01 AM Thanks, Eve. :)

Francesca Pappadogiannis August 28, 2018 at 1:47 PM Brilliant! Loved this Susan. Congrats on your win :) Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 6:00 AM Thanks.

Joseph May August 28, 2018 at 8:47 AM Congrats on your win Susan Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 6:00 AM Thank you.

Charles Messina August 28, 2018 at 7:41 AM Susan, are you sure you didn't write my original poem, I absolutely love the stanza you added. I went back and forth between selecting a few poems for 1st and this was one. Finally, I flipped a coin lol Thank you so much for entering my contest and a huge Congratulations on your win! :) Charlie Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 5:59 AM Oh my. Such a wonderful comment. I am honored to have placed. This was fun and I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sponsoring and for all you do.

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 28, 2018 at 3:42 AM Congratulations, Susan on your win. Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 5:57 AM Thanks.

Susan Ashley August 17, 2018 at 9:56 PM What a great ending stanza you've added to Charlie's wonderful poem, Susan. It fits seamlessly both poetically and rhythmically. Love it! Best wishes for a win! ~Sussn Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 6:54 AM Thank you, Susan!