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Memories vs Merits

The good times, and fitness
In albums borne witness
Falls short on the test
That determines one’s rest.

But stakes can be raised
By giving G-d praise,
Respecting a spouse
Within one’s own house,
Being noted Above
For doling out love,
And enriching ascent
On the charities spent.

Descendants will place
On the mantle Grand’s face
Then frolic near the shelf
Making memories of self.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/13/2025 11:08:00 AM
Great to know I'm going straight to paradise. Just ignore the indiscretions, the odd misdemeanour, and leaving the child in the supermarket.
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Hannah Borke
Date: 7/13/2025 12:41:00 PM
A person knows when they’ve done good.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things