Memories vs Merits

The good times, and the fitness
In albums bearing witness
Has no bearing on the test
That decrees eternal rest.

The stakes are risen rather
Though merits wisely gathered
Like, kindness to our kin,
For example, is a win.

Spreading random love
Should also score Above
While charities, well spent,
Ensures a rich ascent.

In any case, they’ll place
On the mantles, our face
Then frolic near the shelf
Making memories of self.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Bell Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Great to know I'm going straight to paradise. Just ignore the indiscretions, the odd misdemeanour, and leaving the child in the supermarket.
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July 13, 2025 at 12:41 PM
A person knows when they’ve done good.
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