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Lucent Skies

celestial lotus       
illumines indigo skies ~
pearlescent white winter moon


fulgent faceted diamonds
radiant starlight ~
veiled and waning by morning


sunrise glimmers on the lake
dawn's paintbrush holds pastel hues ~
topaz reflections


December 11, 2022
Triple New Charlieku Contest
Sponsored by Charlie Messina
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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2023 10:12:00 AM

Very gorgeous one, Jenna. Congrats

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/4/2023 9:43:00 PM

"pearlescent white", "fulgent faceted" - are beautiful adjectives. Congratulations!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/4/2023 8:16:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Jenna. You did this so well. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/13/2022 10:23:00 AM

Beautiful, Jenna ~ lovely title too

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/11/2022 11:15:00 AM

Each image a gem Jenna but the last image really stands out, Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:06:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. It was the first of the three that I wrote.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/11/2022 9:29:00 AM

Very, very nice. I think Charlie will like these, Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:06:00 AM

Thank you very much, Milt.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/11/2022 7:53:00 AM

Love the imagery here Jenna ! Each verse brimming with a new dimension. I love “ celestial lotus illumines indigo skies “ Hauntingly beautiful. Susan :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:05:00 AM

Thank you for letting me know which line touched you, Susan. I appreciate your comments.