Lucent Skies

celestial lotus       
illumines indigo skies ~
pearlescent white winter moon


fulgent faceted diamonds
radiant starlight ~
veiled and waning by morning


sunrise glimmers on the lake
dawn's paintbrush holds pastel hues ~
topaz reflections


December 11, 2022
Triple New Charlieku Contest
Sponsored by Charlie Messina
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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Very gorgeous one, Jenna. Congrats
Alex Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 9:43 PM
"pearlescent white", "fulgent faceted" - are beautiful adjectives. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Wonderful imagery, Jenna. You did this so well. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Beautiful, Jenna ~ lovely title too
Cunningham Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Each image a gem Jenna but the last image really stands out, Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Logan Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Thanks, Tom. It was the first of the three that I wrote.
Hankins Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Very, very nice. I think Charlie will like these, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Thank you very much, Milt.
Lawrence Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Love the imagery here Jenna ! Each verse brimming with a new dimension. I love “ celestial lotus illumines indigo skies “ Hauntingly beautiful. Susan :)
Logan Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Thank you for letting me know which line touched you, Susan. I appreciate your comments.
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