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liquor and run

Take a shot from me
maybe rum maybe whiskey
one sip two bites and a large swag
hungry dinner night 
a quick 
sip
and spinning 
ryming words that never were
laughing at sins 
all for a date
the calender strikes again
would You like to dine

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Date: 5/11/2025 1:03:00 PM
This has a playful bite to it--“laughing at sins / all for a date” is such a sharp, cheeky line. The rhythm stumbles and spins in just the right way, like a tipsy night flirting with trouble. Clever and vivid--really enjoyed this one!
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Date: 3/25/2025 8:43:00 PM
reminded me of my old boozin' days thanks for the memories
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