Id's Just His Sticks

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Poetic Form: Rhyme (Inner Rhyme)
Inspired: 2024 March 26
Image: N/A

They dubbed him Sticks at Epoch's tip 
when hitherto matter none neither you
of matter grasped that awed amassed
was all he cared and none who'd dare
his love of sticks made jokes he exists
baton they'd be, had two and not one
that's why he's sick name's not, sticks
no, it should be sick; like mentally sick
course, it was said but ne'er his stead
except for one whose heart's not won
he swore a day written Suite he'll play
lost how plays Suite without his sticks
that day of days be-he did play suitely
all saw hero sits, light shone his sticks.

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