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7/17/2025 for Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Your Summer, lad, will be gone soon. It's time to make some memories. It's writ in phases of the moon - your Summer, lad, will be gone soon. Then, Autumn sings a sadder tune. Take action now, your time to seize. Your Summer, lad, will be gone soon. It's time to make some memories.

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Date: 7/28/2025 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write. Summer will be gone soon but great memories will live on. Have a blessed day with your win................
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:26:00 PM
Why thanks Paula!
Date: 7/28/2025 10:18:00 AM
Your poem was right on point for the theme I gave and is nicely lyrical. Congrats, David.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Date: 7/28/2025 6:50:00 AM
Congrats!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 7/28/2025 6:35:00 AM
David, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this great entry. Janice
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 7/17/2025 2:03:00 PM
Excellent! Hope those young lads listen!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Kim! I don't think they'll listen, but I do think they'll have fun - lol!
Date: 7/17/2025 1:06:00 PM
At 64 making memories sounds too much like work. Nice trio David
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David Crandall
Date: 7/17/2025 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Tom, 2 years behind me!

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