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5/10/2025

The quote in the last two lines is from “Shoo—Fly Pie And Apple Pan Dowdy,” a song by Dinah Shore, music by Guy Wood and lyrics by Sammy Gallop, published in 1945 — Image created by Mark Toney using Copilot (2025-05-08).

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I wrote a documentary
that would have won a BAFTA
But nobody would fund it
It was not what they were afta

I pitched the plot to Netflix
cuz they have a lot of money
They sent me packing, laughing
“Don’t call us, we’ll call you, Sonny”

I lastly pitched to Paramount
hoping they’d save the day
They took one look at me
shook their head and said, “No way!”

It’s such a shame that no one knows 
your worth unless you’re famous
I always seek some solace from
those cookies made by Amos …

Famous (yummy)  Amos (yummy)
“Makes your eyes light up (and)
Your tummy say ‘Howdy.’”

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Date: 5/18/2025 12:53:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Love the ending. Yes, his cookies make a tummy say ‘Howdy.’” Have a day writing with a cookie in hand..........
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/18/2025 3:19:00 PM
Paula, thank you for your delightful comment that has brightened my day.

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