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Devils Gauntlet

Darkness was descending in a crawled  dread,
entering evening’s  creepy  gloom by that fence
vile and sharp as evil silhouettes  of greed’s luv..
In the narrow guarded gates, a  Halloween alibi
living  open, is a walking workforce all powerful
sporting eyes, bloodied, from searing naked souls…

Gamblers risk the chains always snapping
Ankles bound clank with links as Metallica
undoes panic screams, of nonexistent you,
now a mere silent statistic mute and shorn,
tied down in a sterile stainless-steely night
left to the mercies of a tamed cold, so feral…

Edenites guard walled riches from the ogre
that hails from a south, full of satanic heat!

(11/27/2022 - For Emile Pinet’s Halloween contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 12/15/2022 12:48:00 PM
wow, great descriptions. Eerie is the word!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/22/2022 4:08:00 PM
Thank you :)

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