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Coconuts

COCONUTS
A long time ago, 60 years plus I am sorry to say
My grandfather gave me a 78 record to play
On my Dansette player I eagerly did one day
I heard coconuts in the weirdest way.
It went clippety clop, clippety clop
Just like a slow donkey that didn’t stop
Throughout a cowboy kind of song
With an American drawl slow and long.
It was about a mouse at a pantry door
Who had been scratching for a year or more
And when he got through, he would be mighty sore
There weren’t a darn thing in there
Life gets tedious, don’t it.
So that was the song with the coconut clop
It conjured up the wild west with a coconut flop
A Stetson and a cupboard as empty as could be
With a coconut sound for an old gee gee.

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Date: 10/6/2023 5:31:00 PM
Entertaining!
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Janine Lever
Date: 10/7/2023 3:38:00 AM
thanks for your comment. strange how a title for a competition conjurs up long ago memories. I enjoyed being 10 yrs old again. xxxx

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