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Ceiling Fan

The lazy old   wooden fan
   worked   his tired arms
   twisting ‘round ‘n ‘round
Straining   against   the hot air
   trying to push   the room’s heavy
   layered heat   into motion.
 
The still air   resisted   
   hesitated  
   trapped   within flat walls
Dead air   suspended
   hanging it be 
   as stagnant
as were his   parting words.

Today   though he be gone,
the slow fan   blades   of his betrayal
   still turn ‘round ‘n ‘round,   
   wringing   my heart daily
His stuttering words   of good-bye
   cutting   more   deeply 
with each   turn of thought.

Now   I be nothing
   but a heavy   heat
   of   dead-ed air
Holding   the broken  
   of my stagnant 
   heart.       

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