- Haiku X 292 - Blushing October -

                                when vine-clad eaves blush
                               quenches the thirst of the tree -
                                   their rusted leaves shook

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Karen Croft

Date: 10/8/2023 10:02:00 AM

Very beautiful

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/6/2023 11:31:00 AM

Great picture and haiku. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2023 11:42:00 AM

Great ku! Sensuous.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/2/2023 10:38:00 PM

Amazing images, Anne-Lise! I thoroughly enjoyed this haiku of pretty scenes and brightness.

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/2/2023 4:37:00 PM

beautifully penned, the charm of the season, so colored, thanks for the enjoyable poem yann

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/2/2023 4:06:00 PM

Anne-Lise, hi! Your haiku describes the landscape surrounding us here in KY now. My heart gasps with the beautiful gifts to be seen! I agree totally with Sam’s comment! You’ve set us in the motion! Blessings!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/2/2023 12:03:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise! How I love your inventive, image rich haikus! There is such a wonderful sense of movement in this one - not static - with words like "blush," "quenches," and "shook." I get the feeling of the fall wind rising! Blessings and hugs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2023 11:50:00 AM

Creative lines in this one. I like the colorful vine picture. It looks very much like a vine that grows wild here called vetch. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara