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Autumn Falls

Let's be inspired by the struggle 
instead of drowning
in our sorrows
Today you're down & fighting struggles 
but the sun will shine
on you tomorrow
Sometimes it's hard to see the good
when clouds are persistent
with the rain
The storm surge is really an illusion
for those insisting
on your pain
Resist the urges of confusion as they're
just bumps 
along the road
Some paths have twist & many turns
but you must stay
focused on your goals
No one that quit ever rose 
so keep your eyes
on the rise
When up don't forget that you were
down nor those that
rejoiced at your demise

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Date: 10/1/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hello Jason Radle, I like the line Some paths has twits and many turns. I also like : sometimes it is hard to see the clouds are persistent. This will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. i will be reading your poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend; /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/5/2024 3:38:00 PM
Hello Jason Radle, Your vey welcome. Enjoy your weekend. My friend. /Darlene/
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 10/2/2024 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Darlene very much appreciated!! Enjoy your day

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