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At the Intersection of Perfection

Our spines a-tingling
    cerebrums a-ringing
  Sweaty clothes cling and clasp
    our collective breath, erratic gasps 

  High up a panorama like unto none
    a celestial heaven under a golden dome
  Every figure perfect, colors flow and blend
    Folks pray the show never ends

  A murmur ripples through the crowd
    though no one tells what we saw out loud
  Right at the top, at the intersection of perfection
    one mosaic missing ~ O! that it had escaped detection

  Disappointment's discovery stuns young and old
    'one mosaic missing' - folks' spirits, bitter cold

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Date: 8/15/2023 5:17:00 AM
Oh how easily the perfection of a "moment" can be tarnished and a memory stained. Nice one Gershon....a thinker
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Date: 8/14/2023 4:45:00 PM
One mosaic missing…ominous!
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Date: 8/14/2023 3:51:00 PM
complexity, i thought of someone looking at the sky at night, thanks for sharing
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