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A Queen's Review

This was inspired by Jan's Review......

Amend
My friend

A trick
be quick

I tried
Then cried

Thank God
I plod

On scene
My Queen

Review
my spew

You can
Aunt Jan

Tell me
Miss Dee

If right
Delight




Jan the "Footle" Queen gave me a constructive review
And she will do the same for you.
Seek her guidance and direction
She is filled with hugs and inspection.  Thanks "Aunt Jan" :)

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Date: 4/7/2015 5:23:00 PM
These are great....big fan....of Jan
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Daisy Marie Yant
Date: 4/8/2015 10:40:00 AM
I am a fan...of Jan...because she can!! Much Love
Date: 4/6/2015 4:46:00 PM
aww Daisy it was my pleasure to be asked to help you with your footles :-) This is simply charming a 7 and faves from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2015 4:52:00 PM
Any time Daisy I have had so much support and encouragement on my poetry journey am only to willing to help:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Daisy Marie Yant
Date: 4/6/2015 4:50:00 PM
I can't thank you enough. Much Love!!

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