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where do we go when we dream? To a life in our past?

Or does the curtain come open between this life and what 

lies beyond I puzzle often about it

Laid out in hot sunshine I drift away
starting to day dream of magical places
I run through sun dappled forests
and come across some unicorns.

They greet me like an old friend
one offers  me a ride delighted
I scramble onto her back gripping tight
 as she flies up so close to the sun.

then swooping down to mountain tops
nearly unseating me I gasp grab her mane
as she plunges down to meadows full of flowers
awaiting us with bubbling stream flowing through.

She halts and steps in the water up to her back
she plunges and swims I notice fish and frogs
as we head upstream coming to a clearing
She stops and clambers out onto a beach.

Not just any beach it is full of elves and fairies
giant toadstools and atop of them sits a  dwarf
smoking from a hubbly bubbly long stemmed pipe
I stare around in wonder as old oaks glide past us.

Each greeting us by name and biding us  welcome
I could not member being here before, scratching 
my head I went with the flow as if I was in Rome
when a crow flew by cawing as it carried on its way.

I startled awake realising I was still here where I started
it had all been a dream but it felt so real maybe I was there
so many mysteries and hidden things to life when one dreams
it makes me wonder and ponder  if  Dreams are just dreams?

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Date: 2/27/2025 9:49:00 PM
Once in a while they seem like more than mere dreams. Great question, Shadow. I enjoyed your take on this theme
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Date: 2/28/2025 5:58:00 AM
Yes they do Andy far out for some but hey poetry lends itself well for flights of imagination tnks for reading hugs Shadow
Date: 2/27/2025 11:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative "A Day Dream" write. Yes many questions with few answers. Our dreams mean something. Maybe??? They say bad dreams come from what we ate or to warn us. I like happy dreams the best. Great last line... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 2/27/2025 12:28:00 PM
me too I prefer happy dreams Paula bad dreams I agree it is possible that they are a warning You should always be wary I think. I mean why do we dream if they dont have a purpose? hugs Shadow
Date: 2/26/2025 5:16:00 PM
A nice existence influences dreams, but fantasies remain fantasies. Your fantastical ideas amuse me. Enjoy your dreams dear Shadow
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Date: 2/27/2025 12:32:00 PM
Jury is out on that I think Sotto ty for reading glad you were amused hugs Shadow
Date: 2/26/2025 3:34:00 PM
Dreams are dreams but a good life influences them. I enjoy your fantasy thoughts. Happy dreaming.
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Date: 2/26/2025 4:42:00 PM
court is out with me on that one Hilda there's dreams that make me pause lol hugs Shadow

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