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Pink by Christiane Vleugels

You Surround Me

In Silk and Dreams, breakfast at Tiffany’s 
nights of lavender lace, mornings with dew 
a highlighted garden of mysteries
waterfall wishes, windblown thoughts of you

In a playground of desire, succeeded
candle flickering a flame, whispers true 
a familiar song-  Just What I Needed
waterfall wishes, windblown thoughts of you

In a Shakespearean Sonnet, refrain
nights of lavender lace, mornings with dew
echos in flight, blossoms against the rain
waterfall wishes, windblown thoughts of you

In blushing shades and twilight symphonies
In Silk and Dreams, breakfast at Tiffany’s



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 * Just a little Scribble *

(Because Love is in the Air)


Songs ~ 
Deep Blue Something - Breakfast At Tiffany's
The Cars - Just What I Needed (1978)

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Running Wolves Date: 10/3/2020 9:46:00 PM everyone longs to be in someone's thoughts.... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/4/2020 6:39:00 AM The longing can be unbearable at times. Other times, it surrounds the heart at just the right moment. Thank you Robert. :) Brandy

Charlie Knowlton Date: 3/30/2020 9:59:00 AM Again! Another original and beautifully written poem by Brandy Nicole. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/30/2020 8:01:00 PM So kind of you to say. Just lingering in music and poetic thoughts. Thank you Charlie. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/26/2020 4:17:00 PM Hi Brandy, your scribbles are symphonies from the heart, emotions flowing down the page. The wonderful lines do paint gentle emotions in the heart. Music does inspire the heart to sing and your heart does sing so well, Brandy. I love the content. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike. XX. A Fav Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/26/2020 8:38:00 PM So kind of you to read my poetry. Thank you Mike. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Music truly inspires me. I appreciate you. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. :) Hugs, Brandy

Honesty Oimbo Date: 3/20/2020 8:02:00 AM IT is a good poem. It sounds that you want to present an experimental work of art. I like it Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/20/2020 4:02:00 PM Thank you. Music and art truly inspire me. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 3/19/2020 1:48:00 PM Oh my absolutely wonderful as always dear Poetess... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/19/2020 2:19:00 PM Thank you Robert. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/18/2020 10:56:00 AM Beautiful lines full of emotional impact. I loved the read! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/18/2020 8:30:00 PM So kind of you to say. Thank you CayCay. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Lewis Raynes Date: 3/18/2020 2:09:00 AM Such a relaxing read, lovely Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/18/2020 8:29:00 PM :) Thank you Lewis. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 3/17/2020 1:04:00 PM Your sweet poetry surrounds your reader with feelings of glee, contentment, serenity and gratitude! So wonderful a read, dear Brandy! And thank you so much for sharing beautiful feels! My warmest wishes.. Love and hugs. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/17/2020 9:23:00 PM Dear Besma, you are always so kind and thoughtful. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. For being here, for being you. Many wonderful blessings to you my dear friend. :) Hugs and Love, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/17/2020 8:44:00 AM Impressive and expressive. You did this perfectly. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/17/2020 9:21:00 PM Thank you Rick. So kind of you to say. Just lingering in words and in music. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/15/2020 3:05:00 PM I really like how you made a new kind of sonnet with that repeated line at the end of each stanza and coming back to the breakfast at Tiffany's at the end. Very creative work, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/15/2020 6:31:00 PM I am enjoying this journey with Sonnet's lately, and music inspires me. Soooo, I decided to place them together. The repeating of certain lines just felt right. Thank you Andrea for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/14/2020 4:17:00 PM Such a lovely piece Brandy, excellent sonnet with wonderful imagery! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/14/2020 9:20:00 PM You are so kind. Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Becca Teagan Date: 3/13/2020 10:09:00 PM This is gorgeous! I love the repeated line, it really makes it flow. Very nice, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/13/2020 10:23:00 PM :) Thank you Becca. You are so kind. I appreciate you taking a moment to read this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Eve Roper Date: 3/9/2020 9:48:00 PM Love the repeated lines in your sonnet, Brandy... Beautiful and soothing. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/9/2020 10:18:00 PM Awe, thank you Eve. It felt so right, to repeat these few lines. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt Date: 3/7/2020 10:20:00 PM And I said, "What about breakfast at Tiffany's?" And she said, "I think I remember the film". Nice to finally see your waterfall wishes sonnet, Brandy. Your candles and dew and lavendar lace and garden of mysteries all play a musical scene of delight. Magical. A fav. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/7/2020 10:28:00 PM :) Yes, the waterfall wishes are indeed visible now. I am enjoying adding music to my poetry. At times. This is filled with so many magical moments. Thank you John, for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy

Paul Schneiter Date: 3/5/2020 6:21:00 PM I'm virtually certain it doesn't get any better than this. The imagery alone is world class. Add to it the flow and the story line and you have . . . what is another Brandy keeper--a masterfully conceptualized and composed composition. Bravo! Hugs/love, Paul Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/5/2020 7:44:00 PM Dear Paul, your kind words and compliments are appreciated. You always say such sweet things to me. Images certainly take the imagination beyond the sky. Thank you for your wonderful comment. I am smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Edward Ibeh Date: 3/5/2020 4:24:00 PM Another brilliant sonnet, Brandy:-) You're pretty adept at this form! Incidentally, I LOVE "Just What I Needed" by The Cars Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/5/2020 7:30:00 PM Music inspires me and my muse. :) I am enjoying this form of poetry. I know, that song is a Classic. Thank you Edward. :) Brandy

Kudzai Mhangwa Date: 3/5/2020 2:14:00 PM The poem is so lyric and each lines flows gracefully into the next. The overall impact of the poem is a sing-song kind of poem that is romantic and charming! Very well done Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/5/2020 7:28:00 PM Thank you Kudzai. Seems this poem is filled with many magical moments. I appreciate your thoughts. My beat to you. :) Brandy

Paul Callus Date: 3/2/2020 4:25:00 PM Romantic and sensual...you tickle me pink (as suggested by your visual:)) The repeated lines are very impactful...You give Sonnets a new dimension. Regards // paul Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/2/2020 9:36:00 PM Oh my!! I am blushing, if I have tickled you pink. :) I give Sonnets a new dimension, such an amazing compliment. Thank you Paul. Yes, there is love, romance and passion in this. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2020 7:18:00 AM Verses of love and romance --I enjoyed the tone and flow, Brandy--the repeating lines add to the beauty of this poem. Certainly it feels like love is in the air--and it sings. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/1/2020 7:29:00 PM The melody found me, as the lines repeated. Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Vijay, for saying my words sing. :) Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 3/1/2020 5:53:00 AM Mornings with dew in the garden of mysteries leaves a beautiful image in my mind. This is so romantic and sensual and playful, so you... beautifully written, Brandy. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/1/2020 7:16:00 PM Such a beautiful thought, mornings with dew. A flower in bloom. I couldn't resist Thank you John. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy

Silent One Date: 3/1/2020 4:25:00 AM In a playground of desire... now that is some playground.... i guess we all have playground, but then we have others who want to take us into their playground.... great sensual sonnet.. nice flow... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/1/2020 7:14:00 PM A playground- can mean many things. Emotions, the being. Of course in this case, it is what you think. Desire and passion. Love and romance. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy