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not sure I got it quite right but you get the drift

You know

You know about Jack and Jill
when they went up the hill
not for water but as lovers
Jack with half mast trousers
holding Jill fell down the hill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 3/13/2025 8:01:00 AM
This really tickled my fancy hehe. Nothing like a fun limerick to bring a smile to your face.
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 3/16/2025 8:31:00 AM
yes shadow, i've not been here very long - just about a year. ty for the welcome <3
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2025 5:01:00 PM
ty Hiba are you new to soup? if so welcome and have fun your visit was most welcome pleased you enjoyed it hugs Shadow
Date: 2/17/2025 3:16:00 PM
Quite a hilarious mistake, if you got it right… ;)
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Date: 2/10/2025 3:27:00 PM
Long time no see. Love this, Shadow
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Date: 2/10/2025 10:55:00 AM
If this is your first attempt at lims, Shadow, you're off to a good start. I also have one about this quirky couple: Refurbished Nursery Rhymes: Jack and Jill, a Moonshine Lullaby. Check it out, if/when you have the time. I love this genre.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/10/2025 12:57:00 PM
no it is not Jim just the first in a long time which means I am very rusty ty for kind comment hugs Shadow
Date: 2/9/2025 6:40:00 AM
When Jack and Jill went up the hill - Jack asked if she was on the pill - Jill of course said no - So now we all know - That he didn’t fall by free will…… Beryl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/9/2025 7:59:00 AM
lol Beryl you are so good at this form ty for reading it hugs Shadow
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