Within Dreams

The night whispered as I stirred
and I lingered under a warm blanket
before walking barefoot 
through a narrow hallway.
I’d been sick in the morning
angry at work-
and I didn’t know why.
Earlier in the night a friend and I
talked about politicians
and he showed me a thick book
of poems, he called modern.
I said I read more recent poems.
He was sad, and I was tired
and I drove him home.
We spoke about our lives
and I talked about my losses
things I was struggling to understand.
The night was still.
I talked about what I
settled for, 
what I was meant to be
and I felt my heartbeat.
I knew I was living
to write another poem.
Streetlights shone stars
and when I got back home
I listened to speakers on TV
for inspiration and to a song
to soothe my soul. 
I turned on my laptop
saw a prompt to write
about dreams within dreams.
The prompt stirred
within chambers of my heart
before I slipped into a dark room
and went to bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 11/26/2024 8:50:00 AM
We all have our ups and downs. I haven't heard from you much, though.
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Date: 11/23/2024 8:22:00 PM
When sick and angry, don't go to work. You may regret it.(from experience). You succeeded in writing a very interesting poem.
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