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NOTE: I published this poem at Poetry Soup in June 2025 (poetrysoup.com › poem › whispers_of_the_wind_1739738) but deleted it.  This is my original poem.

WHISPERS OF THE WIND

*WHISPERS OF THE WIND
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fiery skies ablaze
sunset's final, fleeting glance
day's last, burning breath

whispers of the wind
through the trees, a gentle voice
a gentle goodnight

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Bj Legros Kelley Date: 9/18/2025 12:41:00 AM Very pretty <3 Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/15/2025 2:53:00 PM sweet ~ lovely flow Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/15/2025 6:06:00 PM thank you...appreciate your dedication in reading many of my poems

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/15/2025 1:57:00 AM - Beautiful and sensitive, Sara :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/15/2025 6:05:00 PM many thanks, dear Anne-Lise, hugs from Texas, Sara

Rowena Velasco Date: 9/14/2025 7:00:00 PM Your haiku beautifully captures the fleeting magic of sunset and the gentle whispers of nature. Keep writing—your words let readers pause and truly feel the world around them. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/15/2025 6:05:00 PM awww, you're most kind Rowena. Glad you found my poem captivating...wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/14/2025 3:58:00 PM LOVELY CayCay Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/15/2025 6:04:00 PM thank you, CayCay :-) poetry hugs