Where Intention Once Stood



My thoughts walk barefoot on gravel roads—aching, slow, and scattershot.

My mind drifts like dusk in worn linen—frayed, faded, and folding in on itself.

My mind, grown tired of its tidy metaphors, slumps like a clerk at closing hour—unnoticed, necessary, numb.

My brain, vast as prairie land at sunset, lies fallow—dreaming the hush between thunderclaps.

My brain has taken the quiet path through woods not quite snowy nor lovely—just worn, and wondering where it last turned.

My brain, a lantern gutted of oil, flickers faintly beneath the architecture of centuries—it remembers too much.

My brain, a parched cathedral steeped in sermons long forgotten, weighs the dust in its own procession.

My brain, a faded lyre, trembles with thoughts too tender to hold—each one a ghost of once-bright song.

My brain, like Arthur's helm at gloaming, rests—dented by thought, dulled by long crusade.

My brain, a theater haunted by a thousand borrowed tongues, performs rituals where intention once stood.

Its voice speaks as though the soul were sharp as steel—blunt not by age, but by silence.


Copyright © 2018 by Mickey Grubb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/5/2025 4:26:00 PM
Outstanding poem, Mickey! My once well-intentioned brain seems to have its own design since I began aging... I enjoyed each couple of lines but especially liked these: My brain, a parched cathedral steeped in sermons long forgotten, weighs the dust in its own procession. Deep stuff here! have a splendid evening, Sara
Login to Reply
Grubb Avatar
Mickey Grubb
Date: 8/6/2025 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara. You got it. Happy you enjoyed the piece.
Date: 8/5/2025 1:49:00 PM
Ahh the pleasantries of aging. Still, it ain't all bad. The brain is a marvel. Wonderful creation still not entirely understood. Awesome poetry Mickey
Login to Reply
Grubb Avatar
Mickey Grubb
Date: 8/6/2025 8:09:00 AM
True! Even in its wear, the brain remains a mystery and a marvel. Glad the poem sparked that thought. Thanks for checking it out...
Date: 8/5/2025 12:06:00 PM
You're an excellent poet Mickey. I enjoyed your expressive poem about memory. It has a good structure.
Login to Reply
Grubb Avatar
Mickey Grubb
Date: 8/6/2025 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Riley. Your words are too kind, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter