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What Makes My Soul Roar

NOT BASELESS IS 

Not baseless is the ocean’s roar, the build up to that bass before 
it all comes crashing into shore, foaming it draws back for more
I’m sure that there are high notes too, perhaps too high for our purview
but to the sound of rock and roll, I find that sea has taken soul

By Aaron Davis 

Not voiceless is the ocean's roar, crescendo notes rise off the floor  
it all comes waving on the shore, rising up to meet me at the door   
I'm sure that there are treble clefs and flats but heh! what I adore,  
is when Maestro strikes a pose, it makes my soul, begin to roar. 

By Mystic Rose

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Joe Dimino Date: 8/14/2025 6:17:00 AM Delightful! That moment of attention, and then the brief tension of spirit ascending anticipation. Music is Divine Communion. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/14/2025 10:12:00 AM it is indeed, I'm going to karaoke tonight to sing a beatle song entitled " when I'm sixty four " looking forward to it .

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/13/2025 5:28:00 PM there's something powerful whenever the maestro lifts his wand...my heart soars and I'm got up in the music. Captivating words, dearest Rose, hugs, Sara Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/13/2025 7:11:00 PM We each have different styles of music that make our hearts sing, but heh its the ocean and we all love it, thanks for the comment dear Sara

Jay Narain Date: 8/13/2025 11:14:00 AM Great dual poem, melodious and heartfelt. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/13/2025 7:10:00 PM I think we made a great team, lol, thanks for the message

John Fleming Date: 8/13/2025 7:56:00 AM You caught the mood perfectly here with this one, Rose. Very nicely crafted. :) john Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/13/2025 7:10:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it John hope your keeping well, thanks for stopping by my poetry :)