What Makes My Soul Roar



NOT BASELESS IS 

Not baseless is the ocean’s roar, the build up to that bass before 
it all comes crashing into shore, foaming it draws back for more
I’m sure that there are high notes too, perhaps too high for our purview
but to the sound of rock and roll, I find that sea has taken soul

By Aaron Davis 

Not voiceless is the ocean's roar, crescendo notes rise off the floor  
it all comes waving on the shore, rising up to meet me at the door   
I'm sure that there are treble clefs and flats but heh! what I adore,  
is when Maestro strikes a pose, it makes my soul, begin to roar. 

By Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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DiMino Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Delightful! That moment of attention, and then the brief tension of spirit ascending anticipation. Music is Divine Communion.
Rose  Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 10:12 AM
it is indeed, I'm going to karaoke tonight to sing a beatle song entitled " when I'm sixty four " looking forward to it .
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:28 PM
there's something powerful whenever the maestro lifts his wand...my heart soars and I'm got up in the music. Captivating words, dearest Rose, hugs, Sara
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:11 PM
We each have different styles of music that make our hearts sing, but heh its the ocean and we all love it, thanks for the comment dear Sara
Narain Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Great dual poem, melodious and heartfelt.
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:10 PM
I think we made a great team, lol, thanks for the message
Fleming Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:56 AM
You caught the mood perfectly here with this one, Rose. Very nicely crafted. :) john
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:10 PM
Glad you enjoyed it John hope your keeping well, thanks for stopping by my poetry :)
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