Waterfalls

Headwaters,
Of the world’s flowing souls,
Cresting to flight and misting rainbows.

Everyone.
Searching for another.
To endure sacrifices behold,

Cascading
Heart’s ladles dip into
Basins of memories in plunge pools.

Waterfalls,
From the rapids of youth,
To the flat waters of golden years


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Contest: Some Form of Crystalline
Form: Verse : Parallelogram de Crystalline
11.02.14
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Received an NA in the above contest.

Entered in Edward Ebbs's contest: Only for those NA's on 01.23.16
The contest calls for an explanation of what the poem means to the author:

This poem is a summary of life.  
Headwaters=birth,
Cresting=growing up, 
misting=your effect on others and the world, 
'searching for another'=could be spouse, money, God, or just yourself, etc,        
Sacrifices=what you traded for what you wanted, 
cascading=life, time goes by so fast

Once you reach old age, hopefully your waters are calm (flat), and not still turbulent or made turbulent due to regret from choices and the trades you made in youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/27/2016 6:46:00 PM
cAme back to this oldie to tell you bye for the next several days. I have to get up SO early for this dang flight and I found out I have to pay 35 dollars each way just for a small luggage. Geeeez. Happy New year, my dear friend. until then!!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 12/27/2016 10:01:00 PM
I saw your blog, have a great trip and yes, the airlines have found new ways to collect revenue.
Date: 1/31/2016 10:46:00 PM
ROB, Congrats on your win in "Edward Ebbs" contest. LINDA -
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:44:00 AM
Rob.."Headwaters, Of the world’s flowing souls, Cresting to flight and misting rainbows." My favorite verse. I love this very much, congrats on your placement Rob..Be blessed *smiles*-luloo
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Laura, and may God Bless you.
Date: 1/24/2016 10:18:00 PM
ROB, Congrats on your awesome, win. Luv **SKAT**
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thank you Skat in the Hat
Date: 1/24/2016 9:22:00 PM
Congrats Rob, thank you for entering this contest :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Ed for my placement.
Date: 12/30/2015 12:25:00 AM
So well constructed... your 3/6/9 formation is well maintained with superb grammatical flow... the essence of enjambment here my friend. Well done! Keith
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:02:00 AM
nicely done :)
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Date: 4/15/2015 12:40:00 AM
Rob, I came to see Waterfalls again. I see it is a metaphorical one. I hope that will do for the anthology on bodies of water. I would sure include it if I were the publisher! So when I learn the details of that book finally taking entries, I will let you know. (in the meantime, if you have ever written a poem actually about a favorite body of water, such as lake or a beach site, I'd sure like to see it!!)
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:24:00 PM
I am in love with your lines... This is a great piece and I hope to spend more time on your other works. Thank you for the incredible share
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:00:00 AM
ROB, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/23/2014 2:05:00 AM
Beautiful as a whole dear poet Rob. Regards. -Safa
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Date: 12/1/2014 10:09:00 AM
I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....
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Date: 11/7/2014 8:21:00 AM
This is another good thinking poem, enjoyed!
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Date: 11/4/2014 11:19:00 AM
Excellent imagery....I laughed at your comment on one of the blogs that was posted. I'll give a hint..."may" instead of "can"...lol
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/4/2014 8:36:00 PM
She did not find it funny though, but it can be ( or maybe it's may be) hard to bring smiles to all. :)
Date: 11/3/2014 3:21:00 PM
love that last part, rapids of youth to flat waters of golden years. I don't think they are looking all that golden. Seem kind of muddy as I look ahead. haha. Nicely done for the contest!!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/4/2014 8:37:00 PM
TY, and gl to you too in the contest.
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