Visionaries

      Anyone with two eyes can see
        especially gents who look at knees
     
      The apparel aisle labeled ‘Party Dress’
        should be renamed ‘Partly Dressed’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/3/2025 4:47:00 PM
oh so true....the last time I chaperoned a high school prom, I couldn't believe the lack of dress many of the gals 'wore' EEGADS.
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Date: 9/3/2025 3:31:00 PM
haha, that brings a new meaning to "visionary"
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Date: 9/3/2025 3:06:00 PM
I’m with CayCay, just why were you in that aisle?.. is there something you’re not telling us. Oh… if you should decide upon that little pink number…. They’ve got stilettos in size eleven… in aisle seven…. You shall go to the ball, Cinders ;-)
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Date: 9/2/2025 10:26:00 PM
I have seen such dresses and imagine the confidence it takes to strut in it as huge! lol. Good poem!
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Date: 9/2/2025 9:13:00 PM
**** What it is, that's the biz, what it will be, well we'll see. **** The preceding was my off the wall rambling for tonight. Thank you. Now, what are you doing in that aisle? Leg man? The title is a hoot, and the poem, too, of course. Gershon. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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