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A NOTE TO MY FELLOW VIC'S ARE THE COPS ON A CHARM OFFENSIVE.? RIGHT NOW? I SALUTE YOU FROM THE HEART.! STAND STRONG I AM COMING.!!! AND STAND WITH YOU ALL RIGHT NOW.)

Victoria, do your duty, Along with me'

Do we all hear the rumour? A funeral draws near.' A spectacle is intended I think that much
Is real clear.' There will be black gloves and the
Muffled drums, that measured tread..Somber
Theater spun.' Staged to draw compassion from those (who might come?) The cornet may sound? Majestic..But I think we all know
What's the come..'
That vic-pols funeral is marching in the shadows here thrown long.'
Under the sun, As many narratives un-ravel.. That they still try to grow.' So will the
Blinds be drawn upon them? Will the windows
Stare out blank.? And also will True Blue Victorians 'about-face?' And here I shall be quite frank! Leave
Them to realise.? What a mess they have banked.! Heaped up like those mountains.'
When (they turned on their own?) Yet I think its not Victoria.? Nuh..Thats not where their
Love; and loyaltys are sown.' May they well listen.. And deeply' to that winds lone lament and moan.'
In a broken-hearted city.' Where they once did strut.! Its recorded and shown
To posture and enact such wicked anger, to vent, Yes I see, And saw
For me it has stuck deep in my heart, and in my gut.To remain reminder forevermore.'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/30/2025 11:54:00 AM
I don't really understand what goes on in Victoria and England, etc but I do hope some relief will be coming to the world, if at all. Your Soupmail goes to "error" and throws me off Soup when I try to answer it, but honestly I did not really know what you were talking about, Blessings, Joe (I just lost my part time job. the whole school went bankrupt and our boss shorted us all out of a whole month's pay. Nice guy, huh?) I was forced into complete retirement coming up on birthday 70.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/30/2025 12:25:00 PM
I am concerned to hear your Job is gone Andrea, may the Lord proovide without means.' All you need and require.'
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/30/2025 12:22:00 PM
Well in the meantime..Just Hop over to my page lol))) Untill you are fit enough to run away...Well Victoria is In Au and the church i souoed You about is in England so two different sets of problems..Yet its all under the w e f i guess.?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2025 11:54:00 AM
I am getting a new hip soon though, and I am very excited for that. Hope it will allow me to walk better and be able to run , dance and jump agan
Date: 8/29/2025 8:02:00 AM
Great writing, Joe. I was disturbed when I read that UK embassy was struck by a Putin rocket, and the response was to placate, tamp down. Putin will not stop until someone stops him. He is a madman, near the end of his life, and all he can think about is legacy. Appeasement, reason will not work with him. Not certain who or the group your Poem is referring to, but, probably, like here in the US, when politicians, adversaries pass away, the public display is often of great admiration. As though it were all a game...with common people the only serious, God loving participants. True patriots, great people should never be forgotten, for they withstood the many onslaughts of evil. selflessly, often alone standing for God and Country.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/31/2025 6:16:00 AM
Thank you forvthe correction Joe Dimino..You are a fair man.)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/30/2025 8:52:00 AM
Yes, just made correction. Thank you. I will keep trying to understand your nation, its politics and people. We are not so different. Lots the same here in the US. Globalist will continue to try and divide us, lump us into their spiritually neutered melting pot of Dumbed Down.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/29/2025 11:22:00 PM
Yes there were atrocitys at the Start...Terrible stuff no getting Away from it Joe Dimino, but A lot had inception with the governance (not the majority) Also from the 1960s to 1990s There was a great wish to reddress the 'past wrongs' but You can't it is counter productive..Now i see the globslists siezed on the mood And have used it as a lever to Break up the better country that emerged.' One method is To funnel immigration and cause a 'backlash?' Have a think people.???
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/29/2025 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Joe; enlightening. I did watch video, and several others. Also have been learning about the history of Melbourne, Victoria in general, and abuses the Indigenous populations have endured over the years. The gold rush that brought wealth hungry scavengers from around the world to rape the land and its people. I am learning. The assault on personal rights and liberties during COVID was nothing less than criminal. Difficult to forgive such atrocity.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/29/2025 12:32:00 PM
Its all about the facist state leaders of Victoria and their police henchmen In 2020/22 Joe Dimino..Two police have been shot dead And i am wondering they were Part of the forces deployed against protesters..If you check out the longer videos Of Battleground Melbourne You will get an idea of the evil Perpertrated..' you will be shocked and enlightened.' Rumble is the better platform.) The write title expresses the reality that Melbournites can at last do something..They do Not have much to lose now.' Better to make gains.'
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