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My heart still waits where shadows fall, For love that left yet owns it all.
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Date: 9/19/2025 7:53:00 AM
Stunning Couplet
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Date: 9/17/2025 7:23:00 AM
you slay me with this soulful, intimate imagery, krish!
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Date: 9/16/2025 11:24:00 AM
We yearn & learn it is our love which lingers on & in the depths of it all where even shadows fall. Lovely couplets Krishika! xXhugs
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Date: 9/16/2025 6:23:00 AM
A poignant couplet!
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Date: 9/15/2025 8:46:00 PM
This is really good for such a brevity piece, especially that second line which I think is certainly extremely representative of the yearning of love of that person we love so much.
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Date: 9/15/2025 7:49:00 PM
The yearnings of a love so precious.....
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Date: 9/13/2025 11:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Untitled" write. Few words with much said. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............
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Date: 9/13/2025 10:58:00 AM
So lovely my dear poet friend Krishika. I love this couplet and a fave. Thanks a lot for sharing. Thanks also belatedly for reading and commenting on one of my poems. God bless you always and your superb poetic talent. Keep on writing. I'll be back soon to read from you again if you don't mind. Hugs
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Date: 9/7/2025 8:01:00 PM
Very nice couplet!
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Date: 9/6/2025 6:09:00 AM
An enchanting couplet, Dear Poet. Two lines have so much depth, many lines may not deliver! It will stay with me.
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Date: 9/5/2025 10:19:00 PM
One can divide this short poem in four parts. All have depth in meaning.
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