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Happy for my shared 3rd place in 'Musings For Love' contest, sponsered by Ink Empress, especially since the other poems were superbly beautiful. 

 

A Love that was forbidden                                                                                                              some said we’d go to hell                                                                                                                           it may have all been wrong                                                                                                                      in our world - all was well

Long starry night walks                                                                                                                     days of dreamy bliss                                                                                                                              the warmth and tender touch                                                                                                                      and Oh the sensual kiss

I cherish the time we had                                                                                                                          the gentle hugs you gave                                                                                                                      until we meet again my love                                                                                                                    I’m the keeper of your grave.

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Date: 2/20/2024 6:09:00 AM
Dear pivotal, its good to read you for the first time, and this poem is very evocative and touching especially those last lines speaks volumes and hits strong, so heartfelt! Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/20/2024 7:35:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback. :)
Date: 2/11/2024 9:32:00 AM
Wow simple but deep. My favorite kind of poetry. A fave upon this one
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Date: 2/11/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thank you kindly. :)

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