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Until We Meet Again

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Happy for my shared 3rd place in 'Musings For Love' contest, sponsered by Ink Empress, especially since the other poems were superbly beautiful.

A Love that was forbidden some said we’d go to hell it may have all been wrong in our world - all was well Long starry night walks days of dreamy bliss the warmth and tender touch and Oh the sensual kiss I cherish the time we had the gentle hugs you gave until we meet again my love I’m the keeper of your grave.

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Ink Empress

Date: 2/20/2024 6:09:00 AM

Dear pivotal, its good to read you for the first time, and this poem is very evocative and touching especially those last lines speaks volumes and hits strong, so heartfelt! Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win

Pivotal Poetry
Date: 2/20/2024 7:35:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful feedback. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2024 9:32:00 AM

Wow simple but deep. My favorite kind of poetry. A fave upon this one

Pivotal Poetry
Date: 2/11/2024 9:00:00 PM

Thank you kindly. :)