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Image result for pictures of older couples in love This is about what we would hope our life would be.

Transform

A love that has weathered wild storms
And youth's fierce passion contained
Tender, deeper than lust ingrained
An opened sonnet of life transform

A tapestry still on an open loom
Unfinished here upon this earth
Those golden years, a story of mirth
Their roots deep, fragrant flowers bloom

Two hearts somehow in rapport
Good character, a crown they share
With every gesture and each care
Maybe their overflow will pour

A bond that's never tired nor tire
Their union, an inspiration's theme
A love that's found in every dream
So let us celebrate this pair

ageloverhyme

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Sotto Poet

Date: 7/23/2025 9:54:00 AM

Love is a great thing! Sharing the journey of aging while tending to that precious bond of love. People who are lucky enough to encounter such raw affection are truly blessed. Great poetry Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2025 11:19:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/22/2025 7:47:00 AM

Your poem is a great write dear friend Sara. It is about the true love and care which is much beyond the physical charms and passion. When true love and care blooms it results in a beautiful poem like yours Sara. I much say it is Excellent and beautiful.....Thank you very much for your kind visit on my love song. With best wishes always....Shubhkaamnaaen

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2025 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Ravindra. I appreciate the visit kind words today. Sara K

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/22/2025 6:44:00 AM

How beautiful is this? You and your muse, along with your ink, did poetry proud with this heart touching, and melting, poem. I haven't read many love poems from that age's point of view and it is uplifting to do so, touches me tender. Love it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2025 1:01:00 PM

Why, thank you, CayCay. I think most people think that love disappears in the elderly. Your comments are uplifting. Sara K

Anne Winter

Date: 7/22/2025 5:48:00 AM

Oh how beautiful love is, isn't it! Growing old together and sharing that sacred bond of love. But it's so rare, truly lucky are the ones who get to experience that kind of pure love. Your poem touched my heart deeply.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2025 12:59:00 PM

Yes, Anne, it is rare that two people can fall in love and love last a lifetime. Thanks for the visit and nice review. I hope your love has lasted for a long time and just keeps on going and growing. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/22/2025 1:56:00 AM

Great to see two people who love each other in their old age. Maybe that is why I sometimes lose my muse.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2025 2:43:00 AM

Victor, I think our muse comes from deep within when all is working well in our lives. I say it is from a Spirit. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2025 11:17:00 AM

Lovely imagery for these tender sentimental, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2025 5:43:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the uplifting review. Sara K

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/19/2025 5:33:00 AM

A wonderful poem on lasting binds and caring true love that many hope for. Kudos for the form as well. A rhyming style new to me. Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2025 5:41:00 AM

S. Zaynab, I appreciate the visit and kind review. I really think the rhyming of this one is what is called internal rhyming pattern, but not sure. I just started off like that and went for it. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2025 11:04:00 PM

ohhh, tender and bouyant images fill your page, sara.. . love everlasting is everyone 's dream...stay young; ill soup mail when able...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2025 4:06:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. I think true love helps a person stay younger as time goes on. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/18/2025 6:24:00 PM

Beautifully said dear Sara, no greater love then the lasting kind, you made me smile and want to pray for this couple !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2025 4:05:00 AM

Why, thank you, Mystic RR. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2025 2:49:00 PM

Sara, this vividly descriptive, moving poem really celebrates lasting love! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 4:15:00 PM

Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2025 7:27:00 AM

a lovely write for the contest - I haven't checked but I'm sure it was a winner

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. I haven't entered it in a contest. In fact, I did not know of a contest in which I could use it. LOL..Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/18/2025 12:37:00 AM

Sara, this extraordinary piece gleams, glistens, and glows. A celebration of enduring romance. Thank you for your slant on Kaleidoscopic Sky. I so appreciate that Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Your encouragement is uplifting. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/17/2025 10:21:00 PM

A love that has weathered all storms is genuine love. There is beauty and contentment in such blissful pairing. All married couples should strive to foster such a love. Beautiful rhyming poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 5:55:00 AM

Valsa, I agree. We can't achieve that perfect love until we go into our heavenly bodies which will be like His. I appreciate the nice review and encouragement. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/16/2025 4:53:00 PM

your words moved me as I thought about a love 'that weathers all storms' and deeper than lust. Well penned words about a soulful, deep, enduring love.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2025 5:00:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the kind and thoughtful review of my work. I know my husband and I will be blessed with that Agape love in heaven, but while here on this earth, it can only be love in a limited fashion. Sara K