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Image result for pictures of older couples in love This is about what we would hope our life would be.

A love that has weathered wild storms And youth's fierce passion contained Tender, deeper than lust ingrained An opened sonnet of life transform A tapestry still on an open loom Unfinished here upon this earth Those golden years, a story of mirth Their roots deep, fragrant flowers bloom Two hearts somehow in rapport Good character, a crown they share With every gesture and each care Maybe their overflow will pour A bond that's never tired nor tire Their union, an inspiration's theme A love that's found in every dream So let us celebrate this pair

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2025 11:04:00 PM

ohhh, tender and bouyant images fill your page, sara.. . love everlasting is everyone 's dream...stay young; ill soup mail when able...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/18/2025 6:24:00 PM

Beautifully said dear Sara, no greater love then the lasting kind, you made me smile and want to pray for this couple !

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2025 2:49:00 PM

Sara, this vividly descriptive, moving poem really celebrates lasting love! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 4:15:00 PM

Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2025 7:27:00 AM

a lovely write for the contest - I haven't checked but I'm sure it was a winner

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. I haven't entered it in a contest. In fact, I did not know of a contest in which I could use it. LOL..Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/18/2025 12:37:00 AM

Sara, this extraordinary piece gleams, glistens, and glows. A celebration of enduring romance. Thank you for your slant on Kaleidoscopic Sky. I so appreciate that Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Your encouragement is uplifting. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/17/2025 10:21:00 PM

A love that has weathered all storms is genuine love. There is beauty and contentment in such blissful pairing. All married couples should strive to foster such a love. Beautiful rhyming poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 5:55:00 AM

Valsa, I agree. We can't achieve that perfect love until we go into our heavenly bodies which will be like His. I appreciate the nice review and encouragement. Sara K

Sara Baker

Date: 7/16/2025 4:53:00 PM

your words moved me as I thought about a love 'that weathers all storms' and deeper than lust. Well penned words about a soulful, deep, enduring love.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2025 5:00:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the kind and thoughtful review of my work. I know my husband and I will be blessed with that Agape love in heaven, but while here on this earth, it can only be love in a limited fashion. Sara K

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/16/2025 11:42:00 AM

Sara, Lovely crowns in fortune's pair. Somewhere beyond sight and consciousness dreams are made real. -Richard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2025 3:09:00 PM

Why, thank you, Rickard for the kind review. Yes, sometimes there is spiritual depth to a couple's love which is beyond compare. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/16/2025 9:16:00 AM

beautiful celebration of true love, enjoyed, this is "charming" poetry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2025 3:08:00 PM

Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K